Friday, November 4, 2016

Pages in the Wind - Identity



Pages in the Wind explores the impact of harsh criticism, especially during the formative years. Funny, how we can remember a hurtful word or put down, especially if it's said by someone we love. In this scene, Emily joyfully sings a song as she skips around the yard. But she wakes up her father, who angrily tells her to shut up. 

I felt deflated, like one of those helium balloons that flies high until one day, it's just a blob of vinyl on the ground with all the air sucked out.
I trotted back to the chair. I felt deflated, like a helium balloon that f



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