Sunday, May 21, 2017

Awakening



Brooklyn Bitters, my upcoming book due out this summer, deals with lies, alliances, love, and family loyalty. It's a character-driven read. In this scene, the main character deals with a range of emotions as she comes face-to-face with her mother's awakening from a long term coma. 

I peered into the darkness for her eyes. Spontaneous whimpers escaped my lips as I held my breath, trying to remain calm and not frighten her. Night had grabbed the light from the room, making it hard to see the outline of her face. But turning on a lamp would splinter the moment and startle her. I don't know why, but the vision of a newborn seized from a mother's womb flashed through my mind. The babies always, always cried.